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Patrick T - Fool
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I'm glad you like the song RGV! Your mix has some cool aspects, but also a few things that are not quite there yet.
The drums sound really nice, and the vocals sound good as well. I also like the tone of the rhythm guitars during the solo.
One thing that doesn't sound very good is the bass, it's very "bulky" has a lot of low-end but not much clarity, it's loud and a bit overbearing.
The Rhodes tone is very lackluster, especially during the intro where it's more exposed. I would try to make it "rounder" if you see what I mean, maybe some modulation, better EQ, some delay, something to sweeten the tone that is a bit bland right now.
The rhythm guitars during the solo have a cool tone but they are too loud (louder than the lead), so I would lower their levels.
And finally, I'm sorry that you didn't add any delays on the eyebrows (see my notes in the FAQ sticky about this song).
So in short, some really cool elements, but some issues as well. Fix these ones and I think you'll have a great mix! Smile
"Music, in performance, is a type of sculpture. The air in the performance is sculpted into something." - Frank Zappa

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Patrick T - Fool - by RGV - 01-04-2015, 06:42 AM
RE: Patrick T - Fool - by ptalbot - 01-04-2015, 01:25 PM
RE: Patrick T - Fool - by RGV - 06-04-2015, 02:56 AM