13-03-2015, 06:19 PM
Hey RasterBurn, welcome to the mixing game 
Well the first thing I will tell you is that you need to LISTEN to a lot of music on your speakers or headphones that you mix on, so you really know how they sound.
And also try comparing your mixes with other music you like the sound of.
Now to the mix,
The drums are very low in the mix and have no body, the kick disappears when the lead guitar starts. Bring them up and give the kick some nice bottom end.
The bass guitar is very boomy try eliminating the ringing frequencies.
Hope this helps!
Well the first thing I will tell you is that you need to LISTEN to a lot of music on your speakers or headphones that you mix on, so you really know how they sound.
And also try comparing your mixes with other music you like the sound of.
Now to the mix,
The drums are very low in the mix and have no body, the kick disappears when the lead guitar starts. Bring them up and give the kick some nice bottom end.
The bass guitar is very boomy try eliminating the ringing frequencies.
Hope this helps!