01-02-2015, 03:54 PM
Sounds nice - really nice drum sound. For me, the vocal is quite a lot too low in the mix, and the guitars too high. The guitars completely drown out the singing (they sound really good, just a bit too loud). Interesting that you used the second vocal track as the lead vocal - for me, the other track was the one that carried the main melody.
The arrangement of this song is a bit problematic, in that the chorus sounds too similar to the verses. It's hard to get more power in the chorus with just what was recorded - I tried adding a little distortion to the guitars and messing around with the piano part to beef it up a bit.
The arrangement of this song is a bit problematic, in that the chorus sounds too similar to the verses. It's hard to get more power in the chorus with just what was recorded - I tried adding a little distortion to the guitars and messing around with the piano part to beef it up a bit.