20-01-2015, 04:44 AM
I think you managed a really good ambience recreation of a jazz club, it sounds pretty natural and balanced to me! 
I'm not entirely convinced by the kick you've used though, I think it has too much beater (even in the chorus section).
I would try to remove some of the click. I would also try to get more definition from the bass, it's a bit undefined.
Perhaps try to dial the bass so that the part where it's walking (in the third verse) is clear enough.
Finally, the end is not suppose to be abrupt like that, it's a fade!
I think if you could soften the kick just a little bit, bring up the bass definition and fade out, it would be a great mix!
I'm not entirely convinced by the kick you've used though, I think it has too much beater (even in the chorus section).
I would try to remove some of the click. I would also try to get more definition from the bass, it's a bit undefined.
Perhaps try to dial the bass so that the part where it's walking (in the third verse) is clear enough.
Finally, the end is not suppose to be abrupt like that, it's a fade!
I think if you could soften the kick just a little bit, bring up the bass definition and fade out, it would be a great mix!
"Music, in performance, is a type of sculpture. The air in the performance is sculpted into something." - Frank Zappa
Some air moved here
Some air moved here