Japan Song

[Cefe]

I think you can make it even more beefy. The kik sounds good but the rest of the drums are not matching the power of the kik. I would say a more punchy snare could help. Also I think the bass is sitting well in the mix but it could be more dirty to help to drive the song a bit more. I like the sounds of the guitars but they feel a bit distant.
Nice sounding strings, maybe a bit loud. They need more reverb or something to blend in better.
Voclas are dry but nice for me.

Thanks for sharing!