23-09-2014, 07:05 PM
Hello man! Nice clear sound! I have some things to mention for improvement. 1st I think your bass has many low mids around 500 hz witch make it a little chaotic. 2nd your lead vocals and the backing vocals (especially the backing) are too dry and too loud. That's what I hear on my monitors. Furthermore, the delay on the lead vocal at the end confuses me. What if it would be a little shorter or at a lower level? And finally at the end I'm trying to hear the solo guitar. I think you should raise it some dbs. I hope my advice will help you. Continue the good job!