24-07-2014, 05:22 PM
I think it's much better now. You're quite close now. Balances are much better now, and it's much more easier for listener to know what to listen. ALso now it's easier to analyze overall sound.
At the moment my main critical attention goes to the fact that overall sound feels little thin. It's difficult area as the guitars are quite there where they should be, but if you can find some magic solutions to the the problem of bass track, it will give you better chances to also to open up the hi-end of this sound. Or maybe it could be solved with one master EQ (some boost around 50-70 hz and 10-16 kHz (do you have pultec?)). I'm not sure if that works, but it just came to my mind.
About the twin guitar part starting at 2.02: now the guitars sound too same, so it's difficult to know what to listen. But if you can find a slightly different character for them, that part can have a conversational character.
Keep listening and commenting what others have done, and try to bring the same listener attitude to your own mixing situations.
At the moment my main critical attention goes to the fact that overall sound feels little thin. It's difficult area as the guitars are quite there where they should be, but if you can find some magic solutions to the the problem of bass track, it will give you better chances to also to open up the hi-end of this sound. Or maybe it could be solved with one master EQ (some boost around 50-70 hz and 10-16 kHz (do you have pultec?)). I'm not sure if that works, but it just came to my mind.
About the twin guitar part starting at 2.02: now the guitars sound too same, so it's difficult to know what to listen. But if you can find a slightly different character for them, that part can have a conversational character.
Keep listening and commenting what others have done, and try to bring the same listener attitude to your own mixing situations.