Hey there sano,
I was surprised by your mix!
Personally, I thought it was a bit too muddy - Though, in your case, it seems more like a personal preference.
Aside from that, I think that the vocals are a bit loud compared to the drums & bass while the snyth-leads are very quite, especially in mono. I am not listening with my KRK's right now, though I do know how it usually sounds on these monitors.
But in any case, I can feel the creativity in the heart of this mix right there! I like what you did with the leads, the Bass has a nice distorted, saturated and phat sound, well done!
The intro should have had a less aggressive bass from the beginning as the bass isn't as surprising at some parts of the track - one of the reasons why I distorted the original bassline in the break less than the rest of the track anyways. Again, just another subjective comment.
I see that you like LCR panning, the chorus-leads are very far out to the left / right. That's good for some, but if you put this track into Mono, the leads are nearly inaudable. The mix itself seems also very centered and less stereo, perhaps the pads at least could use some more width - I loooove width, when used appropriately. Quite a pity, as this mix delivers a great deal of creativity! The filter on the first lead in the chorus ( the one on the left ) has a nice filter on it, really diggin' it, and that bass-supporting-synth has a nice, slow LFO attached to a Filter - Even I didn't think of something as simple, yet nice sounding as that.
If you could make sure that it's a bit more compatible in Mono ( Ergo, doublechecking the EQ on everything while listening to the mix in mono and so on ) and play with the balance of the vocals & leads a bit, I am pretty sure that this can sound pretty wicked - Keep it up mate!
Cheers
I was surprised by your mix!
Personally, I thought it was a bit too muddy - Though, in your case, it seems more like a personal preference.
Aside from that, I think that the vocals are a bit loud compared to the drums & bass while the snyth-leads are very quite, especially in mono. I am not listening with my KRK's right now, though I do know how it usually sounds on these monitors.
But in any case, I can feel the creativity in the heart of this mix right there! I like what you did with the leads, the Bass has a nice distorted, saturated and phat sound, well done!
The intro should have had a less aggressive bass from the beginning as the bass isn't as surprising at some parts of the track - one of the reasons why I distorted the original bassline in the break less than the rest of the track anyways. Again, just another subjective comment.
I see that you like LCR panning, the chorus-leads are very far out to the left / right. That's good for some, but if you put this track into Mono, the leads are nearly inaudable. The mix itself seems also very centered and less stereo, perhaps the pads at least could use some more width - I loooove width, when used appropriately. Quite a pity, as this mix delivers a great deal of creativity! The filter on the first lead in the chorus ( the one on the left ) has a nice filter on it, really diggin' it, and that bass-supporting-synth has a nice, slow LFO attached to a Filter - Even I didn't think of something as simple, yet nice sounding as that.
If you could make sure that it's a bit more compatible in Mono ( Ergo, doublechecking the EQ on everything while listening to the mix in mono and so on ) and play with the balance of the vocals & leads a bit, I am pretty sure that this can sound pretty wicked - Keep it up mate!
Cheers