Japan Song - a little air?!

[FytaKyte]

First of all, I'm Daniel and this is my first real mix since some years.
The song is pretty cool! Is there already a official release anywhere?

The mix is done just ITB. Guitars + Bass = free Ampsims ;-)

I tried to get a little bit "air" in the thing but I'm not really happy with it. The cellos are really hard to get in the rest if the mix.

So I'm pretty curious to here some other voices to my first mix. The working time was about 4 hours.

Hey Daniel - Well Mike has pretty much summed things up, but I did like the energy in your mix. The guitars could probably do with a little bit less energy in the low mids, & that might clear some more space for the upper reaches of the bass... but yeah, the low end could definitely use a little more punch & push.