Whisper to a scream (short version)

[Pedaling Prince]

here is my version of the mix.
I took the short version.
It's not mastered yet! Fresh out from mix!
please tell me what you think about...i could work on that song days and days more

Don't think you need to work on it for days and days more; you've got it sounding excellent already!

My only issues are a little too harsh in sound overall; try pulling back a bit on any tracks with EQ boost in the 5-6 kHz region (a common problem with mixes of this song). Also, vocals are a LITTLE high. Once you pull back on the 5-6 kHz they may be fine or maybe pull them back just a decibel or two.

I look forward to hearing the completed product.