11-11-2013, 03:39 PM
Hi adhi and welcome on board!
This mix sounds pretty good. I think the levels are chosen quite whisely. Nothing here that screams "newbie" at all.
Two things I'd like to mention, though:
The accoustic guitar during the intro has something strange going on. Almost as if an old, worn out cassete is creating artifacts. If this is intentional you should pronounce it more, if not you should look into it.
At first I thought that your mix is quite bass heavy, then I realised that it is not the level of the bass but the kick. It has a quite long sustain/resonance. To tame that I'd try to set a compressor for this task (long attack) or use something like transient designer. A gate might work, too. If you want to keep it that long, maybe an eq-cut set to that resonance frequency could make it a bit less overpowered.
But good work.
Cheers
Artbass
This mix sounds pretty good. I think the levels are chosen quite whisely. Nothing here that screams "newbie" at all.
Two things I'd like to mention, though:
The accoustic guitar during the intro has something strange going on. Almost as if an old, worn out cassete is creating artifacts. If this is intentional you should pronounce it more, if not you should look into it.
At first I thought that your mix is quite bass heavy, then I realised that it is not the level of the bass but the kick. It has a quite long sustain/resonance. To tame that I'd try to set a compressor for this task (long attack) or use something like transient designer. A gate might work, too. If you want to keep it that long, maybe an eq-cut set to that resonance frequency could make it a bit less overpowered.
But good work.
Cheers
Artbass