Thanks to the fine response i were led in the direction of changin this, hopefully to the better.
First off i unmuted the first line of 1st verse - am I embarrased ...
Voice up (and double track unmuted to make it stronger) in verses.
Bas thinned in the 200 area.
Hit the deesser harder, and it were added to background voices
Timed the moved piano part first time they arrive, they seemed to rush just there.
Changed the eq to the tambourine.
Added a discret polysynth and a backwards piano.
Automated the last bv, which sounds more like synthvoices, in middlepiece and under solo.
Copied last distorted guitar chord, I felt it were missin next time the D chord came.
Gave the kick a lttle more beef to drive the rhythm better.
How do you like those changes ?
First off i unmuted the first line of 1st verse - am I embarrased ...
Voice up (and double track unmuted to make it stronger) in verses.
Bas thinned in the 200 area.
Hit the deesser harder, and it were added to background voices
Timed the moved piano part first time they arrive, they seemed to rush just there.
Changed the eq to the tambourine.
Added a discret polysynth and a backwards piano.
Automated the last bv, which sounds more like synthvoices, in middlepiece and under solo.
Copied last distorted guitar chord, I felt it were missin next time the D chord came.
Gave the kick a lttle more beef to drive the rhythm better.
How do you like those changes ?
Old ears, old gear, little boy inside love music and sounds and my wife, not necessarily in that order