Hi,
My attempt at this track. Comments welcomed.
Thanks!
My attempt at this track. Comments welcomed.
Thanks!
Just uploaded a mix/master? Waiting for comments? Why not give back and critique a mix/master, or two!
FytaKyte - Bitter
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Hi,
My attempt at this track. Comments welcomed. Thanks!
Just uploaded a mix/master? Waiting for comments? Why not give back and critique a mix/master, or two!
22-06-2019, 01:24 AM
Hi Mike - pretty cool mix!... I like the overall balances, and the way you kept the mix in the overall shape it was intended to be...
A few points I noticed: - There is a bit of a disparity between the sound of some of the internal mix elements. For example, the drum sound is quite "hi-fi" and very full from low to high in the frequency range, whereas the vocals and the main riff guitar sound a little less polished and pristine. - Along the lines of the above, I would suggest looking to clear out the boxiness in the 350-500hz area on the riff guitar - The vocal sounds like it needs a little more "air" to bring it in line with the drums - There is a bit of a low end/low mid buildup in the background vocals that tends to make them sound a bit dull and muffled - maybe some more stringent high-passing would do the trick. - I think you could afford to lose just a little bit of sub bass out of the kick drum. It tends to dominate the mix in that really low area probably just a little too much for this style of music. A slimmer kick drum down there may help the groove just feel a little lighter and move it along better in line with the tempo of the track. That said, I like the way the chorus hits - you really nailed the vibe of that part of the track.
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23-06-2019, 11:18 PM
Thanks for taking the time to listen to my mix and also posting a critique - much appreciated. I'll be doing my best to address the points raised and hope to post a revision in a few days.
Yeah listening to the reference tracks you mentioned with your detailed comments in mind I get exactly what you mean - thanks. Great tip for the riff guitar too, I was struggling with getting that.
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24-06-2019, 08:12 PM
Hi - I've added mix revision 1. Thanks!
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