Technically everything is fine.
It seemed to me that back vocals are lost in mix sometimes.
And for my taste too bright kick, but it's only my references
The kick is not what I would expect in this genre - too clicky, too bright. Compare your kick with the ref track and killswitch engage and you will know what i mean. The bass is too dominant and really hurting the guitars imho. The Vocals in the chorus are not loud enough and buried beneath the rest. Snare is kinda weak compared with the kick. Overall you should work on the balance and get the volume of kick, snare, drums, guitars and vocals right. This alone will take your mix from 50% to 90%. From that point on the rest is just personal taste and knowing what the fans want to hear.