Hi,
I tried to make this song as natural as possible, with less compression, I don't know if it's ok. I referenced it with Foo fighters All my life which I found similar in vibe.
I think the balance is alright (my listening environment is somewhat handicapped so I may not be hearing everything.) I like the delay in the intro. If you can automate that (or control it manually), you might want to experiment with perhaps making it a little more defined but still back off about where you are now for the rest. I'm thinking extend it out a bit longer and apply a little less reverb. Just random thoughts, there...
When guitar3 comes in, it could be more pronounced. Maybe consider moving that like a bit right of center to counter balance guitar1 just to be more of an exclamation point?
The mix sounded pretty clean, overall and that was something I struggled with for about the first 10 hours of the time I put into my version. Good marks there.