Actions - Devil Words Mix

[xorpheox]

Hello, here's my mix on this song, i would appreciate any feedback about it. I'm just begining mixing and i know there's a lot a need to learn. Thanks in advance.

[iShouldBsleeping]

First thing I noticed was the kick was pretty boomy with no mid/upper mid punch. I feel like pop songs like this really benefit from the high punch so it can be heard on small systems/headphones.

The guitars were very dull.. could have used a boost on the high side of the frequency spectrum. I did like the vocal though. It was very clear and stable. If the kick was evened out a bit and the guitars brightened up I would like it 10 times more.

Check out my mix if get a chance. Thanks.