06-11-2014, 06:19 PM
I'm accepting feedbacks.
Best,
Gibran Sponchiado
Best,
Gibran Sponchiado
Here's My version
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06-11-2014, 06:26 PM
(06-11-2014, 06:19 PM)Sponchiado Wrote: I'm accepting feedbacks. Very generous of you! Have you thought of perhaps giving feedback first?
"Music, in performance, is a type of sculpture. The air in the performance is sculpted into something." - Frank Zappa
Some air moved here
06-11-2014, 09:01 PM
Yeah… why not?
I pretty much uploaded it right after the first print. Listening again, a couple of hours later, I can hear a few things. The vocal sounds pretty smooth. Its dynamic fits pretty well with the song. Some extra effects processing could be welcome (delay maybe?) I probably would have spent some extra time automating volume of acoustic guitars. During solo, the other guitars pop up a bit too much. Im not so sure about the snare timbre in chorus 2. That's not the original sample. I messed up with a few before sticking with that. A more broad approach that I could spend some time working on is the overall dynamic of the song, which could have a bit more energy on chorus 2. It's good until then. I am making some modifications in the room treatment of my home-studio right now and it happened to my subwoofer stop working this week. So I am not so secure about the low end content in the mix. If you have some well calibrated listening space, let me know how that turned.
29-11-2014, 12:49 AM
Hey Sponchiado,
I think you are on the right track, some of the suggestion you have after listening to yourself are spot on, I think the bottom end will get better once your sub is fixed. DL |
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