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Hannes Monked with a fresh arrangement - Monk - 10-02-2019
Spot the changes, win a prize
RE: Hannes Monked with a fresh arrangement - Eastwood - 11-02-2019
Hi!
Just a few ideas that I had upon listening to your mix:
- A couple things appear to be missing such as some of the higher frequencies in your mix. Also missing is a chunk of lyrics, and I don't think anything interesting has been added to that section instead.
- The effects on the vocals during the second verse are creative but they make me think of psychedelic rock or darker alternative songs.
- I can appreciate the time and effort you must have spent doing deep cuts and edits to the arrangement, and I really like some of the ideas here! I think that overall your mix could benefit by adding more of your creative ideas to the song sections and instruments you have been building.
Hope something here is helpful!
Eastwood