(03-02-2019, 07:22 AM)slowpogo Wrote: Here is my mix. It's cool to be one of the first on this track. It feels about 90-95% there (to my ability), but I'll have to sleep on it.

I'm still trying to find a compelling "story" for the climax -- a lot of different pads at once there!

The SFX are a bit cheesy in my opinion, but that's just taste. I minimized the "alarm" sound and ditched the following "sigh" entirely. The beach sounds are fine, I just kept them mostly down during the vocal portion.

Any suggestions welcome.

(04-02-2019, 08:14 AM)ricsanram Wrote: Hello!
It's very interesting to hear what you did with this.
I like how you made decisions based on the feel of the song, like removing the snaps right before the main vocals come in. That sound nice!
I also enjoy the delay at the end of the verse lines, fills out the empty space.
Good job!

Thanks for mixing!
Ricardo Santiago

(04-02-2019, 11:04 AM)The Wizzards Wrote:

(03-02-2019, 07:22 AM)slowpogo Wrote: Here is my mix. It's cool to be one of the first on this track. It feels about 90-95% there (to my ability), but I'll have to sleep on it.

I'm still trying to find a compelling "story" for the climax -- a lot of different pads at once there!

The SFX are a bit cheesy in my opinion, but that's just taste. I minimized the "alarm" sound and ditched the following "sigh" entirely. The beach sounds are fine, I just kept them mostly down during the vocal portion.

Any suggestions welcome.

Where is the kick?

(04-02-2019, 04:38 PM)LukasL Wrote: Only thing that does not really add up for me is the use of delay and reverb. Some things are very dry some are very wet. Does not create a coherent sense of space for me.

Apart from that, I really like your mix and creative choices!

Cheers,
Lukas

(04-02-2019, 04:53 PM)slowpogo Wrote: Thanks so much for providing the tracks, listening and giving feedback!